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[nymph in love with tree]

pretty funny

you clearly can make a great story so i would just keep working on animation tech's and maybe learn some AS to make everything smoother. freaking awesome

ningaJanena responds:

hey thanks! I'm trying to get AS down... hopefully someday :)

[Animationn]

very informative

but boring as crap, plus it wasn't an animation just scrolling text

OvenGloves responds:

LOLNOSHIT EINSTEIN

[happiest song on earth]

you have talent

keep it up and you'll only improve upon your skill, you could go places

wam-bo responds:

that's the nicest review i've ever got

[Ultimate Nub Madness]

nice effort

you need more frames in your animation sequences to make it seems smoother but it was long which makes up for everything!!

when does the next one come out?!

JmX300 responds:

xD I will finish my sequel (with 25 fps) in one week.. or one year... i dont know

[Allergic to Homework]

too slow

not long enough

needs more dialog

keep working at it though cuse practice makes perfect

NeoSkywalker responds:

thanks, you're so much helpful than that guy below me.

[Eternal Lagness (MC)]

it may have taken a long time

but it is only so so you have some skill but you need a better plot and longer time line

make another one!!!

Dead-eagle responds:

thank you? :)

[Valentines-The Love Tree]

i like it

i think you used a motion tween of a movie clip for the stem and then did a mask guide layer tween with a cricle for the branches growing....am i right?

also the fade in on the love's could have been smoother there is a skip when they appear

the grass was cool

great job!

Easedale responds:

Thanks for the comments.
You're almost right. The whole tree is a mask, it's a shape tween growing within it to fill it.
Yeah, I can't work out how to stop thos jerky bits. Each 'Love' is a movie clip with nested tweens. If just one set fades in they're fine but the skip you see is when the next sets fade in, it's like they all have to be in time and skip to get there. If you've any advice on how to stop that it would be much appreciated.

Cheers

[Electro]

pretty sweet

so you made this with just the line tool? did yiou do any of it with action scripts or imbeded movie clips?

midimachine responds:

yes, just ye old line tool and lots of keyframing.

[Inward Singing]

really nice job

best animation i have seen up here in a while must have taken forever

MichaFrario responds:

Well, It took more time than Dio. But I took a long break.